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From a session Sunday with a very beautiful, talented model.

See more photographs of this model here: [link]

Critiques


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If I'm seeing right, the 'skirt' is a shower curtain?? :giggle: Well I'm going to pretend it is anyway, because I think it makes it so perfect to have the toilet paper roll there beside her. I think it's very whimsical, and I like how it's not just right out trying to be funny or cute, like many people would do when putting a model in a bathroom wearing a shower curtain. I do agree with =cutofakiss that the pose/crop is a little awkward, with the extended arm kinda throwing off the balance a little bit. But the lighting and colors are really nice, and draw the eye all across the frame. =D Very different than some of your other works, I really like it!
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:iconcutofakiss:
I absolutely love the matching fabric with the wall color. In some ways, I wish her head was not cut off. It takes away from this photo. Or if her head must be cut off, then add a little more chin. The arm placement on the wall I think should either be more up or more down. If it was more up it would fit more with the way she is standing, and take away the sort of uncomfortable look. If it was more down it would show more of the elbow and actual arm and perhaps add more to the photo. And though I know this is a bathroom shot, I'm not sure where the toilet tissue fits in, though it is interesting. There is still mystery in this photo however that I do like. I would love to see more of these with the matching colors of the fabric circles with the wall. =)
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12 out of 12 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconstoicavictormarius:
ugh ... even better ... still love the color
:iconbloococonut:
I agree, love the skirtish item.
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:icontotallymessed:
Clever costuming, and she has a great physique! I wish the head wasn't cropped off, though. Like to see the whole body.

Love how the lighting casts the shadow of her side and upraised arm.

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I think I will try to stay on her good side!
Her muscle tone is feminine, but nicely fit.

I like the pose. I also like the originality.

Details

April 16
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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XSi
1/2 second
F/8.0
35 mm
100
Apr 12, 2009, 6:27:22 AM

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